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haha

Nice i love it it has great lyrics but as far as the music goes it could have been better ....but its f***ing funny....shorter than your average house hold broom lol

aztec1448 responds:

ha ya thankz man

Holy C***

Wow...ive been skiping every song i came across ...excpet this one it draws you in right from the start and keeps you interested the whole way through...great jom man. love it

SessileNomad responds:

thanks glad you liked it

Nicely done...

It certainly creates an atmosphere of being "lost in the void". So right off the bat this song delivers what it promises which is a very good thing.

And I agree with Iceblueglow. The FX do push back/repress the main vibe, if you will. Your trance lead synth needs to be a lil bit more varied because it almost never changes, only the FX Change (that's how they repress the main riff).

Don't get me wrong the song is great, but it is missing elements of a good "Techno" song that people couldn't help but dance to. (If I were to hear this at a party I'd change it...No offence intended).
For instance, the Back beat of the song doesn't have enough OOMPH! OOMPH! to it. And without OOMPH! you may as well give up. Without OOMPH you only ever hear the song, you won't listen to or feel it.

You need to get the song to tell a story and what do stories have?
A beginning, Middle and a FUC*ING good end. So the song might start off slow and slowly build up then right when you think its all over, you think have figured out the ending to the story...... BOOOOM! you add a twist to keep the story going. (Example- Changing the main riff/beat/lead guitar) Doing this will keep people interested which is what you want.

But then again if you created this song for gaming purposes then its perfect. Only because it creats such a great atmospher for a game!
All in all Great job man! kepp it up! 7/10

DaveGuy responds:

IT IS DONE!!

I have officially boosted the kick.

(rating review helpful as I speak) =)

hmmm

singing wasn't great... but the music was great....oh wait there wasn't any!

Ok, lets face it your not a great singer, but i would like to hear this again with maybe a synthed up and some music...who knows it might turn out great.... But! having said that...next time dont rush it...even if you do....finish it off later instead of posting it...
i really am surprised to see you've posted this knowing this wasn't great.....

harryjarry responds:

I was planning on putting more into it-which I kind of hinted at in the description-but I was in a rush. I like to have whatever audio I make and include in my flashes that I submit to NG submitted to the audio portal as well. For good kicks and downloads if anyone falls in love ;)

I may give this another go at a later date! MIRANDA COSGROVE FOREVER!

yea... :)

Not bad, the drum beats are pretty good but its starts of wierd, slow drum straight to fast....apart from that the song fits well good job with the violins but when they kick in at 1:30 its a bit much and they dong work well it just sounds like noise the song. The main riff gets a bit much.... and the is no really is no different parts to the song you just added and took away the same loops/instruments.
Having said that this song isn't bad....just work on those things in you next song and it'll be perfect. Ill give you a big 5 because the song is catchy from the start...but only a 5 because because it gets increasingly repetitive. keep up the good work.

P.S look foward to see how you improve you next song....can't wait to hear it :)

Good job....

The thing i like most about this song is the drum beat most people don't pay much attention to it...they keep it nice and simple with alot of bass but you put alot more detail into it. Kudos for that. another thing i like is the bass line...you managed to keep it simple with out ruining the song. the only thing i think is missing is another background synth just to give it a little extra weight because the bass is a little light (if that makes sense), thats what i think secrets of sound meant by saying "it has more room to put more stuff into it".
The only other thing i would suggest, make a better ending coz the song climaxes then just dies out of nowhere.

Over all ima give you a 9 because i like the effort you put into the drums....also the the song grabs you hook line and sinker within the first 10 seconds. You've done well keep up the good work.

P.S. Awesome song change at 1:52, Fucken insane XD

Hmmmm

well to me the only thing thats missing is i wicked bass line to go with it....it also doesn't seem to have a main riff...only the background line that kicks in at 28 secs..
all i have to say is add a killer main riff synth a lil higher pitched and a heaver bass.
and mix the song up a lil bit, make it so that about 20 secs in you dont want to stop listening....and just when you think its gonna loop again for the next 20 bars...change it or add a new layer of synth bass etc. I'd like to see this song re-mastered. Make another one! Over all 6 for the effort!

Teqnofreaq responds:

I appreciate your criticism, although I don't think i will redo this track. This trance thing was really an experimental thing, I made about 6 tracks, they are on an EP on my myspace, just search for it.

Bad ass! Mode [ {On} Off ]

This song is wicked but i think you could have done more, it just doesnt go deep enough to grab me hook line and sinker.
But still bad ass man.....bad ass!

hmm

i dont think this song goes deep enough...but i do like the contrasting between the piano and the drum beat. Because the piano suggests slow and peaceful but the drum beat is more upbeat and fast. Only thing I'd ad would be more bass. keep up the good work :)

EdoMan responds:

You're right, i did rush the song.. im still not used to reasons recording stlye... I messed up with the arrangements of the instruments and i didn't have the energy to go back and fix all my mistakes... thanks a lot for the review

Hey, yea...

i like it....after hearing dave guy pull some wicked songs and now you...Where do you get the I'm a drummer so drum beats are easy for me...the hard part is coming up with you know the song part? When my song finaly get approved by the moderaters...mind listening to it....and telling me where i went wrong?

All that aside... I really like this song amazing... 9/10 Kepp it up man....hope to hear another song from you soon :)

Randomizor responds:

Thanks for the comment.

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